Lady Sydney

This chapter was fantastic. ^^ I'm not sure if you've written anymore to it, but I'll check once I submit this. It's really enjoyable and something the reader can really ...

Thanks again, that was very helpful and appreciated. Gracias! :D I'll take it into consideration for when I write something like this again. :smt049~Syd

Quite a moving piece you have here. It was great! ^^ Everything was described well, so I could visualize everything. You have only one or two errors in here: 1. ...

Mmm... I just combine two objects. Use the first two or three letters of the first word and the last two or three letters of the second word. Examples: 1. ...

7/10 lol same here. I will be doing that next week.... *dies*

8/10 lol true true

Thanks so much for the crits, guys! :D :smt049~Syd

Ok, since everyone's already pointed out your errors, I don't think I need to repeat them and tell you what you already know. So... I will move on and tell ...

Just a quick little one chaptered story I thought up while I was thinking of ideas for the next chapter of Escape. This has nothing to do with Escape, though, ...

No it doesn't!!! 9.5/10!! So true. :wink: It woulda been 10/10, but you added that "Soley to annoy Sumi...". See if it just said "JACK SPARROW RULEZ!!!" then you woulda ...

8/10 nice nice =)

7.5/10 Those rock. I want some!

Yeepee. :shock: A bit crammy, yes? First things first, it would be best if you post your chapters one at a time instead of all at once like this. Secondly, ...

No, not me. There are times when I don't like my idea for the story (the plot, the characters, etc...), but I never actually hate my work. I know what ...

*hugs* Welcome back, buddy. *chains you to a chair* You better not leave EVER AGAIN!!! Do you understand?:evil: :evil: :evil: ...oh right. Yes, I miss you. :D Well see you, ...